tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4249139010742186587.post7076472238290984143..comments2016-10-23T06:59:46.283-07:00Comments on Evelyn Irwin - BA (Hons) Computer Animation Arts, UCA Rochester: Film Review of Fritz Lang's MetropolisAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02974523577897261905noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4249139010742186587.post-20121440268754998272016-10-03T00:21:54.551-07:002016-10-03T00:21:54.551-07:00Hi Evelyn,
Yes, I agree with Lewis... you should ...Hi Evelyn,<br /><br />Yes, I agree with Lewis... you should embed the images into the text where they are relevant; so when you are discussing the robot seducing the gathering, you could say, 'as seen in figure 4'.<br />Also, make sure that your quotes are italicised, and referenced correctly afterwards - you have the quote by Barnwell, for example, that needed a (Barnwell,2003) after it, and a quote by Siegfried Kracaucer that needs to referenced in a specific way... see here - http://community.ucreative.ac.uk/index.cfm?articleid=26717<br /><br />Other than that, a very thoughtful review :) <br />Jackiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13332181835614441447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4249139010742186587.post-48642025322348445802016-10-02T11:53:22.345-07:002016-10-02T11:53:22.345-07:00just a quick pointer Evelyn, try using your images...just a quick pointer Evelyn, try using your images in amongst your text as it helps break up big walls of text! :)<br /><br />also make sure you keep posting your thumbnails! you need to have all 100 minimum done for your OGR :)lewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16242686673279500409noreply@blogger.com